http://vedel.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] vedel.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sly2m 2009-10-28 05:02 pm (UTC)

нет, рассказ великолепен :)

просто вспомнилось попавшееся на глаза...
да и рифм там немного, больше ритма
а стихов настолько не чувствую, что из песен слов не знаю, только мелодиев.
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